短文改错。
     此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：
     如有错误，（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
     此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用横线划掉。
     此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号， 在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
     此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
     注意：原行没有错的不要改。

I am very excited to have accepted an e-mail from  you. I" m glad you have made such a great progress that you can write your e-mail good Chinese. I read  your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you sent it to me. How time flies! Our friendship has lasted for several months. We have got to know but learned a  lot from each other. Yes, it is clearly that your life in  your country is quite different from me. Thanks again for writing to me. I m looking forward to hear from  you soon. Best wishes to you or your family.	1. _____ 2. _____ 3. _____ 4. _____ 5. _____ 6. _____ 7. _____ 8. _____ 9. _____                                    10. _____
1. accepted-received/got 2. 去掉a 3. good 前加in 4. show-showed 5. 去掉it 6. but-and 7. clearly-clear 8. me-mine 9. hear-hearing 10. or-and
We were greatly _____ in our investigation by the cooperation of the police.
[     ]
A. exposed B. submitted C. aided D. switched
As the third longest river in the world, the health of the Yangtze River has_______ concern both in China and abroad.
[     ]
A. risen B. ranged C. raised D. attracted
— Is there any room in the ship? — Yes. We can probably_______ a few more people into it.
[     ]
A. press B. squeeze C. hold D. push
In order to _______ a good knowledge of English, he gave up his job and went to study in an English school.
[     ]
A. require B. acquire C. inquire D. address
She was so _____ in her book that she didn"t hear anybody knocking at the door.
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A. concentrated B. attracted C. drawn D. absorbed