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第II卷
第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文．请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误．每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Abby，
How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education Three hundreds and twenty students took the exam
for it，but only a few were chosen and 1 was one of them．Therefore，my parents are not happy about it．They are strong against my going there They say it is too far that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid that I will feel lonely and will not be used to the climate here．They can’t imagine a young girl like me live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead．Then I’Il be able to continue living with them．How could I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?

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Dear Abby，
How are you? I’ve got a删 wonderful news to tell you. I have加been offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Three hundreds--hundred and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few were chosen and I was one of them. Therefore--However, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong--strongly against my going there. They say it is too--so far that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid that I will feel lonely and will not be used to the climate here--there. They can’t imagine a young girl like me live--living alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue living with them. How could--can I persuade them to accept the fact 加that I have grown up?

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试题【第II卷第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文．请你修改你同桌写的】；主要考察你对数词等知识点的理解。[详细]

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第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
I think I am a person who can get on well with an old.               76.__________
So I would like to have a chance to visit to Old People’s            77.__________
Home as a volunteer. I can help them by do some                     78.__________
cleaning and other kind of housework. I would like               79.__________
to talk about them. I can sing songs and dance for them,         80.__________
and I can also read books and magazines for them. I                81.__________
would also like to help ill children in the hospital.                    82.__________
I can talk them interesting stories and play games with               83.__________
them. In a word, I would like to help people need                     84.__________
help. I’m sure I am a kind or useful person.                              85.__________

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Directions: Complete the following passage by filling in each blank with ONE word that best fits the context.
New studies show how food and its production affect the globe and its climate. The process of making a hamburger, for example, requires lots of energy. A cow has to be fed and raised on farmland. And cow waste is a major source of methane（沼气）— 48 especially powerful greenhouse gas. The cow has to be killed. The meat has to be processed and shipped, 49 takes fuel. Most of the cow won’t even be used for meat people eat. By the time a hamburger finally lands on a dinner plate, 50 has made bad effect on the environment.
We can reduce the production of global warming gases by eating less beef. Other kinds of meat like pork and chicken do 51 harm to the environment ---at least 52 terms of the amount of greenhouse gases released. 53 , all kinds of meat are harder on the planet than vegetables. 54 changing our diet to less meat and more vegetables, as it turns 55 , may do the world some good.

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四、短文改错（满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.

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第二卷（共35分）
第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best．However, it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have serious problems in our lives．Parents have gained some life experiences and they know what to act in different situations．That"s why we should ask them for help first when they have problems．Therefore, there are moments when we avoid them and don"t want to follow them．With time passed, my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right．Please turn for your parents when in trouble, for they worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time．

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第二节:短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
One day Rosa wrote to her friend, who was a doctor, invite him to
have dinner with her families. A few days later the doctor wrote back
to her but she couldn’t read his writing because the letters were
written careless. Then she asked her husband for the help, but he
couldn’t read it, too. So the woman went to the chemist’s. The chemist in the shop studied the letter for a long time but he gave her large bottle of medicine. He told the woman she should eat twelve pills a day. Finally Rosa still had no idea whether her friend will come or not.

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