题目

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第二卷
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
短文改错（共10题，每题1分，共10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除和修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Through some efforts, the rescuers cleaned up the ruin carefully which was covered
the mother. Under her body lying her baby. The baby was in small red quilt with
yellow flowers. He was about 3or 4 months old. Since the baby is well protected by his
mother’s body, he was total safe. He was sleeping well when the rescuer carried her
out, and his lovely and peaceful face warmed anyone around him. The rescuer found
there was a mobile phone in the quilt. When he looked at the screen, the massage was
already there.”My dear baby, if you can live, don’t forget how many I love you.” Eve-
ryone who saw this massage burst into tears.

答案

Through some efforts, the rescuers cleaned up the ruin carefully which was covered
ruins
the mother. Under her body lying her baby. The baby was in ^small red quilt with
lay                         a
yellow flowers. He was about 3or 4 months old. Since the baby is well protected by his
was
mother’s body, he was total safe. He was sleeping well when the rescuer carried her
totally                                             him
out, and his lovely and peaceful face warmed anyone around him. The rescuer found
everyone
there was a mobile phone in the quilt. When he looked at the screen, the massage was
a
already there.”My dear baby, if you can live, don’t forget how many I love you.” Eve-
much
ryone who saw this massage burst into tears.

解析

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