题目

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近来由于极端天气，我国云南地区发生了特大旱情，致使小河断流，湖泊干涸，鱼类死亡，湖底成了牧场。请结合下面的提示词，以“Let’s Do Something to Save Our  Environment”为题写一篇80字左右的短文。内容应包括从干旱引出的环境现状、环保意识到节水，节能，控制污染等环保措施方面的描述。首句已给出，不计入字数。
提示词： bad weather, bottom（底部）, river, lake, grass land, save water, drop, tap（水龙头）, energy, turn on / off, recycle, control pollution, tears(眼泪).
要求： 1. 条理清楚，有表明自己观点的句子。
     2. 书写工整，句式规范，标点符号使用正确。
     3. 短文中应尽量包括提示内容，可适当发挥，但不能出现真实的人名、地名。
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China.

答案

Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather.
So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water. Second, we should save energy, such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave；do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.
Let’s act now from everything to save our environment. Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!

解析

这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇关于保护环境的议论文.动笔前先要围绕要点组织材料,确定写作内容,不要遗漏要点内容.在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性,在表达观点是注意情态动词should的应用。结合材料可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。写作中适当使用连词、序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。