题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

江苏省教育厅公布的2013年学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化，请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发布自己的观点。

现状	大约70%学生眼睛近视
主要原因	(1) 睡眠不足;  (2) 长时间看书、写作业、用电脑等
预防方法	(1) 做眼保健操，多进行体育活动； (2) 养成正确的用眼习惯 (3) ……
你的观点	……（至少两点）

注意：
词数100字左右。开头已经写好，不计入总数；
内容必须包括上表中的要点，并作必要地发挥;
条理清楚，语句连贯；
文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名信息。
参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted 近视眼 short eyesight
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,_____________________________________________________________________________________
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答案

The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70 percent students are shortsighted. Here are some reasons. First of all, many students don’t have enough sleep. Second, some students read books for too long time, others do too much homework and use computers a lot.
However, short eyesight can be prevented. We should do more exercises and play more sports. We are also supposed to have a right habit of using our eyes.
In my opinion, it is important to protect our eyes. We should have a break when using them too much. We should protect our eyes well so that we can see the colorful world.

解析

试题分析：本文的写作首先对于现状进行总体的说明，70%的学生有近视about 70 percent students are shortsighted.然后对于原因进行分析，从两方面进行阐述，首先First of all,没有足够的睡眠don’t have enough sleep.其次，看书看得太长时间，写作业、用电脑等Second, some students read books for too long time, others do too much homework and use computers a lot.然后对预防的方法进行阐述我们应该多继续眼保健操do more exercises，养成正确的用眼习惯have a right habit of using our eyes.最后提出自己的观点和建议一方面是有规律的进行休息have a break when using them too much.另一方面保护好我们的眼睛以便看到五彩缤纷的世界We should protect our eyes well so that we can see the colorful world.
点评：本文难度不大，一般都有话可说，写作过程中写作条理性要把握好，对于自己所做的不同的事情，写的过程中通过变换句式和用词上来提高语言的美度。在一件事情写完后要用上表关系的连接词，或平时积累的各类表递进、并列的连词来是文章富于活力。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。