题目

题型：不详难度：来源：

根据下面提示，以“Believe in Yourself and You Will Succeed”为题写一篇短文，词数： 100左右。
提示：
1. 学习中遇到的困难；
2. 如何克服困难的；
3. 从中学到了什么。
Believe in Yourself and You Will Succeed
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　
                                                                                 
                                                                                          

答案

Everyone will face some difficulties in his or her life or study. What should we do when we are in trouble? I think the most important is that we should believe in ourselves. I still remember that when I began learning English, I found it difficult to learn it well. The words were difficult to remember, and the grammars were not easy to understand. Besides, the worst thing was that I was afraid of speaking English aloud, especially in public. I was always afraid of making mistakes. The result is that I couldn’t learn English well. Then, my teacher and friends encouraged me and told me that I must believe in myself and needn’t be afraid of making mistakes.  So, I tried my best to learn English, especially practice speaking English. I still make some mistakes now but I don’t think it is a big problem. Now, my English is being improved day by day. From this experience I know that if we believe in ourselves, we will succeed.

解析

试题分析：这是篇命题作文，题目给出了写作的标题以及内容提示，写作中要紧扣提示，注意要点的完整性。在对事件进行描述时，注意时态的准确使用和主谓一致。可适当的使用一些连词来增加文章的逻辑性。另外可适当使用一些复合句，如学过的定语从句，宾语从句等。
【亮点说明】这篇作文结构完整，表述准确流利。文中出现了一些复合句，使表述更紧凑，如：I still remember that when I began learning English, I found it difficult to learn it well.我仍然记得当我刚开始学英语时，我发现很难学好。That引导了宾语从句。Besides, the worst thing was that I was afraid of speaking English aloud, especially in public.另外，最糟糕的事情是害怕大声说英语，尤其是在公共场合。句中that引导了表语从句。另外，文中使用了一些连词，如and， besides, so 等等。