题目

初一小短文,帮我改错.
如下：
Hello!everyone I'm on duty today .
It's Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .
Last summer
We went to Guangzhou
We visited the Yue Xiu park .
We went shoping at the big supermarket
But too tired and we didn't go to play
We had a good time .
And hope you can go to GangZhou one day .
That's all.
thanks for listening to me .

提问时间：2021-12-08

答案

Hello!everyone !I'm on duty today .
Today is Wednesday Aprill thirteenth .
Last summer
We had went to Guangzhou
We visited the Yue Xiu park and went shoping at the big supermarket
But I felt too tired to go to play
We had a good time .
So hope you will go to GangZhou some day .
That's all.
thanks for listening to me .