题目

求教高手改一下我写的这篇六级作文,
1.低碳生活方式成为人们关注的焦点
2.分析这种生活方式的好处
3.
My View on Low-carbon Lifestyle
Recently,the importance of Low-carbon Lifestyle has aroused pervasive attention among the public.In the mordern world,people from all walks of life have realized the benefits from Low-carbon Lifestyle.
Many factors can account for this situation.First of all,such lifestyle is accessible and effcient.Moreover,the popularity of Low-carbon lifestyle even can protect most of forests and woods from being cut down.What's more,such lifestyle is beneficial for us.It can bring with us more health and we also can breath fresh air in our daily life.
As far as i am concerned,it is crucial for us to take a series of accessible measures to deal with poor environment.For one thing,everyone has to pay more attention to our behavior.For another,government should carry out more useful laws to decrease high-carbon industries.Only in this way can we live a health life in the near future.

提问时间：2021-05-29

答案

My View on Low-carbon LifestyleRecent years(rencently 都被用烂了),the significances（importance 级别不都高） of Low-carbon Lifestyle has aroused pervasive attention among the public.In the mordern wor...