题目

下面文章有没有病句,（蓝体字不管它）
Read" Alice in Wonderland" have feeling
" Alice in Wonderland" tells the story of a girl named Alice down the rabbit hole,and then into the wonderland.She met the White Rabbit,Tweedle Dum,Tweedle Dee,the Caterpillar,the Cheshire Cat,the White Queen and so on.They helped Alice defeated the Queen of Hearts’ Jabberwocky.
I think Alice is very brave.Although at first she dared not believe.She was a little afraid .However,in everyone's help and her own efforts,she found her courage.Alice represents the warriors.She dared to fight against evil.The Hatter represents extremely hate evil.He is very smart ,clever and humor.The Caterpillar and the Cheshire Cat are mysterious figures.They are like the wise men.They always gave Alice the right direction.The White Rabbit represents the faith of the people.Tweedle Dum andTweedle Dee represent the still water runs deep.The White Queen represents the nice people.She hoped for world peace and no war.These people are brave and justice.
However,the Queen of Hearts represents the greatest evil and corrupt government.She always used violence.Her servants on behalf of the nobles.They deceived others for their own vanity.Their fate must be shameful!
This book the author expressed hatred and disgust evil forces.He desired peace,security and happiness.The magic of fairy tales to fantasy,witty humor,proudly of poetry,breaks through the traditional Western children's literature moralism inflexible formula." Alice In Wonderland" is of epoch-making milepost.

提问时间：2021-04-01

答案

大概看了一下
首先,全文时态混乱,不堪入目,讲故事内容,最好全用一般现在时
第三行应是defeat原形help sb.do或to do
第四行she doesn't dare to believe
第五行最好是with others' help found也不太恰当
第六行dared----becomes brave enough会好一点
第七行the wise men去掉the
第八行第一个the去掉
后面看不下去了
简直是纯Chinglish
前面肯定还有一堆错
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