题目

求强人润色这段话（英文）,改的好追加100
My enthusiasm for doing pharmaceutical research comes from one of my female apprentice,She used to be majored in biological science too,but since she study abroad in USA,she change to pursue PhD in pharmaceutical science.I learned a lot about pharmaceutical research from her,like drug efficacy,drug safety and drug design.And I found pharmaceutical research is much more attractive to me than my recent research,because unlike my research about microorganism,it is human oriented and people can benefit from our research directly.From this chance,I found my real interest.
只要意思对,可以大改.
我晕，是让润色这段文字，不是翻译成中文。这是我自己写的，因为觉得写的不够好，“female apprentice”是表示师姐的意思，不是女助手。

提问时间：2021-04-01

答案

润色如下：
My passion for pharmaceutical research has much to do with one of my female apprentices.She used to major in biological science,but after she went abroad to America,she began to pursue PhD in pharmaceutical science.I learned a lot about pharmaceutical research from her such as drug efficacy,drug safety and drug design,etc.And I found pharmaceutical research attracts me much more than my recent research,because unlike my research about microorganism,it is human oriented and people can benefit from our research directly.It is due to this coincedence that I have come to know my real interest.