题目

请大家帮我看看这篇英语的作文.欢迎任何的指正~马上要考试了,托福,独立写作.
Question:nowadays,food has become easier to prepare.Has this change improved the way people live?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Currently,there is a news towards that the preparation of food is significantly easier.Well.Different people have different viewpoints when considering this information.Those who object to the convenience improve people live argue that the change takes more disadvantages.But people who favor the advantages,on the other hand,argue that human’s life gain a remarkable improving since food easier to arrange.As far as I am concerned,although opposition gains substantial weakness of the change,it cannot compete with the positive of the change.
It is markedly that the change improves people’s life becoming healthy.We may mention a common example of increasing opportunities for people to obtain nutrition.As a matter of fact,a person will blind without eating vitamin-E.People take the nutriti

提问时间：2021-04-01

答案

不要总用强调句啊= =
另外是 in the past serveral years吧= =
写作的时候自然点不要那么刻意用句型……