题目

【急需答案】两道英语改错题.
One day,I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rang.I went to answer immediately.She was my close friend,Lisa.When we were talking on a phone,the fire alarm sounded.I ran back to the kitchen.The room full of smoke and beef was badly burnt.I quickly turned off the gas,opening all the windows,and then went out of the house.With my surprise,two fire engines are outside my house.I was rather worried.I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.
Dear Sally,
Now I'd like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation,of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency.The work was interesting but tired.I think it was helpful to work this holiday.It was the first time that I have earned money on my own.I've come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family.I used to keep on ask them for my money,but now I'll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent.I've learnt how to get along well with others.What's worse,I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can't be learnt from textbooks.All these will be good for my furture.In a word,I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

提问时间：2021-04-01

答案

One day,I was cooking in the kitchen 《 when 》the telephone rang.I went to answer immediately.《 It 》 was my close friend,Lisa.When we were talking on 《 the 》phone,the fire alarm 《 was 》sounded.I ran back to the kitchen.The room《 was 》 full of smoke and beef was badly burnt.I quickly turned off the gas,《 opened 》all the windows,and then went out of the house.《 to 》my surprise,two fire engines 《 were 》 outside my house.I was 《 quite 》 worried.I told 《 》the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.