题目

各位帮我看看几句英文语法对不
1.She is an outstanding student and I was deeply impressed with her not only she is a specific student in our department, but more importantly, because of the capability and eagerness for further academic pursuit she demonstrated while learning the knowledge involved in my class.（not only后面要加because吗）
2.Miss Wu always do the homework seriously, she aim herself as one of the member in our department.（中间不加and可以吗）
3.What’s more, not only is she inquisitive and keen to probe into new problems and knowledge, and also can she devote herself to the detailed, elementary, time-consuming works in solving problems.（可以用and also吗?还是应该改成but also?）
事实上是中介写的，我看了感觉有点问题才问的
中介说第三句是老外写的，没有错。。。

提问时间：2021-03-30

答案

你的问题在于句子结构混乱,语法错误.一个单句中只能有一个谓语动词.用and连接两个完整的有主谓宾的句子也是错误的.你应该是在写推荐信吧,既然是代表老师写的,语法错误、拼写错误太多是会被国外学校招生办质疑的.建议...