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Financial education should be mandatory component of the school program.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With the development of today’s economy,people have raised their awareness of financial management in daily lives.Therefore,there has been a trend in schools to involve the financial education as a mandatory component of the school program.In my opinion,it’s unnecessary to do so.
First of all,different students own distinct talents and abilities,which makes them distinguished from each other.And they should be given the opportunity to choose the lessons they like.As financial classes always require mathematic skills,it may appeal to be boring to some students.What’s more,nowadays students are getting more and more stress on the existing subjects,adding the financial class may worsen the situation.
Secondly,financial class is not a lesson we must learn.Although today’s society requires us more about financial management.But as

提问时间：2021-03-26

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