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Every media for communicating information is very significant to hunman beings.Television,radio and books which are used frequently in our daily life.They all use conveniently and never fail to fascinate us.It seems that everything on the earth has its own pros and cons,including the media.
Television ,which I believed that is the most effective of those three.People can use not only one sense to receive the information.Just like vision and listening.For example,people always do some housework when they are at home,at this time,they don't spend enough time watching televison by eyes.However,they can use ears to hear news all over the world as they doing the horsework.Another way,the season will enforced the memory about the information.Also the listening will improve the understanding of news.
But televison also has its disadvantages.It only can be uesd at some stable places,such as a flat,a hotel or others.So it is unconvinent.At this time,radio can do better than television.When someone on his way to workplace,he can use it and enjoy it everywhere.It dosen't need too much space to setted.Only can you use your cellphone.What a pity for it is no screen on it.You couldn't see it ,just listen.
So what about the books?They are reality in our hands and we can touch them by our own.When you want to get information ,touching the paper,smelling the ink ,reading the words.Characters must be the most fascinated thing in our world.But if people use this way to receive information that would be too slowly.
In sum,television should be the most effective media in no doubt.And all the people need information by media for they want the fresh news in their life.

提问时间：2021-03-25

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