题目

这样的雅思作文能得多少分?
Some people say college students should pay for all their tuition fees.To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Recently there is an argument on whether students should pay for all their tuition fees .It is quite understandable that individuals from different backgrounds put different interpretations on the same issue.Some people voice support to this,however,there are also quite a few people who strongly contend that government are supposed to pay for some parts of the fees.
People who advocate that college students should pay for all tier tuition fees ,have their sound reasons.They may be more care about this opportunity to go to college.They must prefer their cost to be valuable.Another factor that should be taken into consideration is that if they are required to pay for all their fees,they may be work harder during spare time.They will go to find a part-time job to earn enough money rather than stay home and play computer games all summer holiday.In addit

提问时间：2021-03-22

答案

7分左右读第一段,感觉很好.套句用得好.第一印象很好,我会考虑给7.5分.第二段开始透露了用词不准和语法问题：may be more care about --> may care more about; They must prefer their cost to be valuable.--> 不通...