题目

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A recent research on Chinese campus shows that more than sixty percent of Chinese university students do part-time jobs when they are free.Some educators may argue that part-time jobs distract students’ attention from study,which is the main job students should do during their college years,but more people believe that part-time jobs help students a lot.As a college student myself,I totally support the idea that college students should get part-time jobs.In my opinion,part-time jobs help the student in the following three aspects.
Firstly,you can earn some money to feed yourself and relieve your family’s economic burden.To middle-class families,support their children to go to college cost most of their incomes.If a student gets a part-time job as a waitress in a restaurant,she will be able to pay for some basic needs,such as food and dress,and improve the economic condition of her family.
Secondly,students can get work experience when doing the part time jo

提问时间：2021-03-22

答案

应该是五分的,有些小错误
To middle-class families,support their children
support should be supporting.
下文还有几个类似错误.
这些句子应该使用动名词作为主语.