题目

英语作文求批改~
Generally,a multitude of people thought that to find a tutor more than ask their friends help,but,that's way get a variety of disadvantage.If you to find a tutor to help you pass an examination,It's possible cost a lot.No matter how cheaper is,also we can improve our friendship during the learning process.
First ,If you ask you friends help ,sometime you save a great deal of money and you can to do what you prefer when you pass the examination.for instance,after two years ago,my little sister had an indispensable exam about painting,and actually My major is art.So,I'm capable of painting picture all the time.Everyone knows arts tutor is really expensive.so my destiny was coming.finally,my little sister not only saved a lot of money but also passed the exam with high scores.anyway,This is a thing of kill two birds with one stone.
Second,it's convenient that ask your friends for help,sometime your tutor aways live lower berth,so if you have any puzzle just get out of the bed,you friend will solve problem anytime.
In conclusion,My advice is that if you need help studing for an exam,It's better to find a friend who is knowledgeable about the exam subject rather than finding a tutor to help you.

提问时间：2021-03-22

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Generally,majority of people thought that it was better to find a tutor rather than ask their friends for help.However,that could lead them to some disadvantages.(改为majority of people更适合大多数.to...