题目
求助批改英文作文(高中)
帮我看看下面这篇作文,给我些具体意见,
-----Now people are under big pressure such as wok pressure,family pressure.As a high school student,I am under study pressure.So how do I reduce pressure in my life?My ways are following:
-----Firstly,make a list of tasks.then you will have enough time to finish them .Secondly,make a list of enjoyment.Write down what you want to do.When you feel pressure or annoyed,spare your time and satisfy yourself.Lastly,it is my little way.have a relaxing bath.light the candles,play some light music or your favourite music ,and then have a bath in hot waterwith Some well-smelled followers.use your inmainatioan,What a good way it is to relax our bodies and minds.Believe it or not,have a try.
帮我看看下面这篇作文,给我些具体意见,
-----Now people are under big pressure such as wok pressure,family pressure.As a high school student,I am under study pressure.So how do I reduce pressure in my life?My ways are following:
-----Firstly,make a list of tasks.then you will have enough time to finish them .Secondly,make a list of enjoyment.Write down what you want to do.When you feel pressure or annoyed,spare your time and satisfy yourself.Lastly,it is my little way.have a relaxing bath.light the candles,play some light music or your favourite music ,and then have a bath in hot waterwith Some well-smelled followers.use your inmainatioan,What a good way it is to relax our bodies and minds.Believe it or not,have a try.
提问时间:2021-03-22
答案
哇,现在高中生都写那么好吗!
以下仅供参考~
1.My ways are following------>My ways are as follows
2.Firstly,make a list of tasks.then you will have enough time to finish them-------->Firstly,make a schedule of tasks for a long term or a short term so you can arrange time to finish them.
(remark:This would make it clear)
3.When you feel pressure or annoyed------->When you feel stressful or annoyed/ When you feel the pressure or being annoyed.
(remark:adj.go with adj./ noun go with noun )
4.spare your time and satisfy yourself--------->have some fun and enjoy yourself.
5.play some light music or your favourite music-----------> listen to some light musics or your favourite musics
6.inmainatioan-------->这是个什么单词?
For your information.
真是个好学的乖学生,祝你新年学业进步~
以下仅供参考~
1.My ways are following------>My ways are as follows
2.Firstly,make a list of tasks.then you will have enough time to finish them-------->Firstly,make a schedule of tasks for a long term or a short term so you can arrange time to finish them.
(remark:This would make it clear)
3.When you feel pressure or annoyed------->When you feel stressful or annoyed/ When you feel the pressure or being annoyed.
(remark:adj.go with adj./ noun go with noun )
4.spare your time and satisfy yourself--------->have some fun and enjoy yourself.
5.play some light music or your favourite music-----------> listen to some light musics or your favourite musics
6.inmainatioan-------->这是个什么单词?
For your information.
真是个好学的乖学生,祝你新年学业进步~
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