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My favourite food made by my mother is bulgogi.
this is beef marinated with soy sauce and other spices,so it smells very good .This food is from Korea I think this food is very delicious.
And My mom do the dishes do very well.
one day,i went home.
But i smelt a odour,drifting from my house
As soon as i came home ,I saw my mother in cooking .
then i saw she is finish.oh that‘s bulgogi.
and she asked me to taste it.And told she whether her cooking is good or not.
So i ate much ,it’s really good,but i pretend i ‘m pain,she was so sad .
but next i Give her a smiling face.
we’re happy .
i like my mother,and i like her cooking

提问时间：2021-03-19

答案

直接给修改后的文章(仅供参考).My favourite food which made by my mother is bulgogi.
The beef is marinated with soy sauce and other spices, so it smells very tempting. This food is from Korea and I think it must be delicious.
And my mother is an excellent cook.
One day, I went home. I smelt something is from my house.
As soon as I came home ,I saw my mother is cooking.
Then she finished and showed it tome. Oh , that‘s Bulgogi!
She let me to taste it, and evaluate whether it good or not.
So I ate the much ,it’s really good. But I played a joke that pretend that I’m pain, she was so disapointed.
But suddenly I gave her a smiling face that said “That’s owesome”.
We were happy.
I love my mother so does her cooking.