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帮我修改这篇英文文章吧!
This winter vacation,I went to my grandpa’s home with my family.My grandpa lives in Chaoyang—a place in Liaoning province.I had a great time!
We played ice-skating on the river,it was very exciting.We laughed,we screamed,all of us was very happy.We also went to a new supermarket in this city.The supermarket has a indoor park.Everyone could play here.There were many things to play.Then ,we went to a book store to read books.I read a book about Psychology,it was very intrersting that I want to be a Psychologist.I can’t blieve my eyes because in the past,Chaoyang was a really poor city.I see the future is going to be better!
We stayed in Chaoyang for 10 days,and I enjoyed myself very much!
改动不要过大!只要改改语法和单词拼写就可以啦!
This winter vacation,I went to my grandpa’s home with my family.My grandpa lives in Chaoyang—a place in Liaoning province.I had a great time!
We played ice-skating on the river,it was very exciting.We laughed,we screamed,all of us was very happy.We also went to a new supermarket in this city.The supermarket has a indoor park.Everyone could play here.There were many things to play.Then ,we went to a book store to read books.I read a book about Psychology,it was very intrersting that I want to be a Psychologist.I can’t blieve my eyes because in the past,Chaoyang was a really poor city.I see the future is going to be better!
We stayed in Chaoyang for 10 days,and I enjoyed myself very much!
改动不要过大!只要改改语法和单词拼写就可以啦!
提问时间:2021-03-17
答案
ChaoYang ,LiaoNing Province 地点大写.
3行 was改成 were
5行here改成there
bookstore连写
6行very改成so,so...that ,如此,以至于
8行see改成futher后加of the city
希望对你有帮助
3行 was改成 were
5行here改成there
bookstore连写
6行very改成so,so...that ,如此,以至于
8行see改成futher后加of the city
希望对你有帮助
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