题目

找人帮忙修改英语作文,初三的（上海）
I Will Succeed 字数要求：60字以上
开头已给：Everyone has difficulties in his life...
1、When you are in trouble,what will you say to yourself?
2、What will you do?(Give at least one example)
Everyone has difficulties in his life,and so do I.Different people have different ideas when one is in trouble.At that time,I will say to myself:"I will succeed.",besides,I will work harder and harder and never give up.Nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it.Where there is a will,there is a way."I will succeed"is the best encouragement when I meet with any difficulty.
那个……不仅是语法错误需要修改出来,还有任何用词不当、搭配不当、文意重复、偏离题目之类都要修改出来……
总之就是大家来找茬,找得越多越好……修改得越完整越好……词汇用得越浅显越好,句子用得越复杂越好…………
TVT……拜托了!

提问时间：2021-02-27

答案

Everyone has difficulties in his life,and so do I.Different people have different ideas when they are in trouble.When I meet with any difficulty,I will say to myself,"I will succeed."What is more,I will work harder and harder and never give up.Where there is a will,there is a way.Nothing will be difficult if I put my heart into it.
差不多就可以了,你写得很好了,短小精悍,就是第二句中,前面说的是people,那么后面最好和people相对应,避免重复就用they指代people.还有,英语中要引用某人的话时一般不用冒号,而是用逗号.其他没什么问题.