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Today I watched the 15th movie of Detective Conan called Quarter of Silence.I think that Detective Conan is a good and famous comic.I want to insroduce it to everybody
Detective Conan is a TV cartoon .children in Japan love it very much.Now ,more chinese people love it ,too.The writer of it is Gosho Aoyama ,he is the one of great comic writer in Japan .When he was a little boy,he liked Sherlock Holmes very much.He started writing Detective Conan for magazine Sunday in 1994.The detective story was from then on
Kudou Shinichi,the famous detective ,he is also a high school student.He is a 17-year-old guy.His mother is a well-known movie star in Hollywood .His father is a great detective story writer.His dream is being the next Sherlock Holmes.He always helps the police to find murderers .
One night ,he with his girlfriend named Mouri Ran is in amusement park.He sees a suspicious man in black.When he is watching the man trading .The other man in black hurts him and gives him a new kind of medicine .And he taks 10 years off his age .When he wakes up.He becomes a little boy .
With Doctor Agasa's help.He gets some useful things .They help him go on helping people.Now his name is conan .However.He also wants to find the men in black .and get back to be a Chinichi Kudou.
Oh,　what a great comic .I hope you love it as me .

提问时间：2021-02-27

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Today I watched the 15th movie of Detective Conan called Quarter of Silence.I think that Detective Conan is a good and famous comic.I want to introduce it to everybody.
Detective Conan is a TV cartoon.Children in Japan love it very much.Now ,more Chinese people love it ,too.The writer of it is Gosho Aoyama ,he is one of the great comic writers in Japan .When he was a little boy,he liked Sherlock Holmes very much.He started writing Detective Conan for magazine Sunday in 1994.The detective story was from then on
Kudou Shinichi,a famous detective ,is also a high school student.( He is a 17-year-old guy.His mother is a well-known movie star in Hollywood .His father is a great detective story writer.)(这一段句式重复,建议修改）His dream is being the next Sherlock Holmes.He always helps the police to find murderers .
One night ,he with his girlfriend named Mouri Ran was in amusement park.He saw a suspicious man in black.When he was watching the man trading .Another man in black hurted him and gave him a new kind of medicine .Then he taked 10 years off his age .When he woke up.He became a little boy !.
With Doctor Agasa's help.He got some useful things .They help him go on helping people.Now his name is Conan .However.He also wants to find the men in black ,and get back to be Chinichi Kudou.
Oh,what a great comic .I hope that you will love it as me .
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