题目

刚写了一小段关于核能和新能源的短文(明天要交的作业),请帮我指出错误,
我刚写的一小段关于核能的看法,请各位高人帮我指点下有哪些不足,如语法或词汇上的错误,
For my part,I don't approve of over-dependence on nuclear energy
to generate electricity.
A important reason is that very unsafe.as you know,
In the event of an accident happened that would be catastrophic for the local country even the world.
but it doesn't mean that we should give up nuclear energy.
I think we can use the nuclear energy while research and development the others new energy,
for example,Wave Power,Wind Power and lightning,
We know that's all without detrimental effects to the environment and renewable.

提问时间：2021-02-22

答案

don't approve--disapprove
over-dependence --over dependent
A important reason ---an important reason is that it's very unsafe
as u know---as we known
research --researching
the others new energy---the other new energy
and renewable--and they also renewable
说句心里话 你这篇作文真的很…………
建议你再修改一下吧
特别是一些表达
BY THE WAY 你是高中还是大学生?