题目

Students from poor backgound such as rural areas ofen find it difficult to access to university education,so people think universities should make it easy for them to study at.To what extent do you agerr or disagree?
It is always a huga challenge for sme students who come from undeveloped region pursuing higher education in uinvercicy or other institue.Because of this phenomena,some people give their suggests that nunivercity shoulid set up a low entrance for enable those student who come from poor background get in easily .this agrument may be ture..
People advocated this ideal argued that there ara few advanced education resources and basic teaching facilities in this area,this lead to students there had not been instructed better in the coures of elementary and secondary school compared with those in the large city.Therefore give them an easily access for studying in the colleage,bing essential for guaranteeing equality in the socity as a whole.In fact however ,there are mer

提问时间：2021-02-20

答案

首先,你有很多词都拼错了,例如：university（大学）等等,建议你先贴到word里看看~它有自动纠错和联想的功能.其次,雅思写作,要在第一段最好就明确自己的观点.你是支持大学降低门槛的,那就在第一段就明确表示,I think ...