题目

刚写的英语作文,
A saying goes that “failing to educate the child is the fault of tha father”.it is a common phenomenon that many parents would likely to tell their kid what should be do ,and force them to change their habit,while ignoring kids’ real ideas as well as their personal hobbies,out of the intention that ,it may prevent their kids been hurt.Hence some young people complain that it is so painful to be forced to change their habits by the adult world.
There are also another kind of parents,they loves their kids for sure,but they seldom interfere kid’s ideas out of spoil,just let them do whatever they like at the most time,and stand out to point out what the kids done were wrong in time ,so as to avoid the coming mistakes.
From the point of myself,I support the latter one.Practice makes perfect.Only the lessons drawn by one’s own experience can leave deep impression.I am not intend to object that parents should make decision for kids.On the contrary,I consider parents shoul

提问时间：2021-02-04

答案

高人!错误实在太多,改都不好改.单复数,主动被动,基本结构,都有错的.你干脆把题目发到网上让网友帮你写一篇吧,反而省事.