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请把这篇英语短文 语法不对的地方请修改过来 ,
Dear Tom:
I‘m now studing in Shan Dong College Of Tourism & Hospitality .We have less lessons compare to high school life,but the pressure didnt decrease,because lessons are much harder than before,and there are only 4 years for my to enter the community,which means i will have bigger responsibilities.
Teachers and classmates are very friendly to me,that made me feel better from homesickness.and i found that Cambridge is a warm community.I have volunteered to the community and will spend 2 hours every week volunteering.
It is really fun,because i can develop myself!by the way,i would like to invite you to spend the X-mas with me,we can hang out and play for the whole holiday,enjoying the snow view.Hope you can reply soon~
yours
Li Hua

提问时间：2021-01-25

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compare to--compared with,for my to enter:两种该法：1 for me to enter,2 for my entering；bigger最好改成more；that --which； will spend-would spend；every week volunteering-every week in volunteering; ...