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求求一个懂雅思老师帮我改一改雅思作文 改改语法等等 最好给我提点建议和给个分数哈
In this essay, i will attempt to find out the main causes of these problems and provide some useful measures which may control them.
In my opinion, most of them do not have healthy habits,which results in their increasing weight. Unhealthy diet is considered as an important cause. Those who like to eat junk food, such as chips,barbecue and hamburgers, absorb too many calories so that they easily become fatter. In addition to this , irregular diet and less balanced diet are also the significant factors result in weight increasing. Second,it can not deny that lack of physical exercise is a vital reason causes people fatter and weaker. So many middle class with a lot of stress, they can not set aside even a little time to do some exercise. There are no ways to them to consume their fat so they get fat and weak easily.
I feel that there are two ways to control this problem. First , all forms of media should advertise how importan

提问时间：2021-01-21

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In this essay, i will attempt to find out the main causes of these problems and provide some useful measures which may control them.(WHAT IS THE PROBLEMS THAT YOU MENTIONED? IS USEFUL METHODS)In my o...