题目

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working at home for employers.
With the rapid development of technology,we can use more and more ways to communicate with each other.Nowadays,some people suppose to move the work office to home,Communication with colleagues through telephone or Internet,it is very convenient.However,other people have negative position on it.
On the one hand,firstly,some people consider that working at home very flexible,it is benefit for occasional workers and part time workers.Secondly,it can save time which spend on the road between company and home,the more people working at home the less vehicles and leaking smog,it can contribute a lot to solve the traffic jam and air pollution problems.Thirdly,working at home can increase staff motivation,for example,in the office,various kind of noise embrace us such as telephone ring and the voice of conversation,the last but not least,working at home can save offices space,energy and other fac

提问时间：2021-01-20

答案

肯定能,因为你写得很好.good!