题目

you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Younger school children should be required to study art and music in addition to math language,science and history.
I am in favor of the statement that students in primary and secondary schools should be required to take artistic courses.With human’s recognition of the world widened,we become more prone to be well-rounded in order to get accustomed to competitive society.Acquiring various qualities allows us to survive under different conditions.Therefore,basic aesthetic knowledge is indispensible for every person to be taught since he or she is young.
Art causes people to be creative and inspired.Submerged in the deep sea of art and music,one may gradually comprehend the metaphysical philosophy,instead of the concrete numbers in textbooks and learn about a different way of understanding life.To illustrate this abstract principle,we just need to take a look into the life of Einstein,one of the greatest physicians in 20th century.Undoubtedly regarded as a giant figure of physics though,Einstein is generally omitted his musical talent.He has been playing violin since six years old.He is fascinated by the harmonious chord in which he cultivated imagination and abstract logic that helps him discover the theory of relativity later.As he said,” Life without playing music is inconceivable for me.It brings me imagination,which is more important than knowledge.”
Apart from the inspiration,art and music also serves as assuagement.Psychologists suggest that listening to classical music causes our body to release reassuring chemicals.For this reason,classical music has been introduced into treatments of mental illnesses.As a result,learning artistic courses massively prevents children from being aggressive and irritable.According to a research done in the suburb of Beijing,children who have learned some sorts of art commit crime about 32 percent less than those have not.
Advantages of studying art and music have been self-evident.What’s more,without the entertainment of art and music,young children will lose a large part of joy studying history and language in school.For the further development of children,music and art lessons should be definitely required in primary and secondary school.

提问时间：2021-01-16

答案

I am in favor of the statement that students in primary and secondary schools should be required to take *courses related to the arts.(With human’s recognition of the world widened 不太确定你的意思),we become more prone to be well-rounded in order to *be accustomed to competitive society.Acquiring *different (或multiple) qualities allows us to survive under different conditions.Therefore,*it is indispensible for everyone to learn basic aesthetic knowledge at an early age.
Art *is the foundation of human creativity and inspiration.Submerged in the deep sea of art and music,one may gradually comprehend the metaphysical *pilosophies,instead of *just the concrete numbers in textbooks.*It presents a different way of understanding life.To illustrate this abstract principle,we *can simply take a look at the life of Einstein,one of the greatest physicians in 20th century.*Though he is undoubtedly regarded as a giant figure of physics,*Einstein's musical talent is generally omitted in the chapters of his life.He has been playing violin since six years old.He is fascinated by the harmonious chord,in which he cultivated the imagination and abstract logic that *helped him to discover the theory of relativity *later on.As he said,"Life without playing music is inconceivable for me.It brings me imagination,which is more important than knowledge.”
Apart from the inspiration,art and music also serves as assuagement.Psychologists suggest that listening to classical music causes our body to release reassuring chemicals.*Classical music has been introduced into treatments of mental illnesses as a result.In addition,learning artistic courses (massively 换个词吧) prevents children from being aggressive and irritable.According to a research done in the suburb of Beijing,*it is 32 percent less likely for children who have learned some sort of arts to commit crimes.
Advantages of studying art and music *is evident.What’s more,without the entertainment of art and music,young children will lose a large part of joy *that cannot be obtained from studying history and language.For the further development of children,music and art lessons should *definitely be required in primary and secondary school.