题目

英语翻译
近十年来,全球农产品贸易市场出现的一大变化是跨国农业贸易公司通过纵横向一体化的方式,不断加强对大宗农产品供应链的控制,从而逐步取得对全球农产品贸易市场的垄断地位.
In nearly a decade,one of the huge changes of the global agricultural trade markets is that international agricultural trade enterprises through a horizontal integration way to strengthen the control of the supply chain of the bulk agricultural products gaining the monopoly position of the global agricultural trade market gradually .
请问怎么能翻译得好这个句子?求指教!

提问时间：2021-01-11

答案

首先要顶一下,用词和语法都有水准.只是要提醒：可能是你打字太快,句子的谓语没有了.下面是我的建议,其中挂号内的是需要删除的,大写的是改动的：
In nearly a decade,one of the huge changes IN the global agricultural trade markets is that international agricultural tradING enterprises through (a) horizontal integration (way to) HAS strengthenED theIR controlS of the supply chain of the bulk agricultural products gaining the monopoly position of the global agricultural trade market gradually