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Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories with their employees to the countryside. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The iusses about traffic and housing are tend to be worse and worse.Some people suggest that we should encourage large companies and factories moving to the romote area in order to solved these problems.Personally,I am not a supporter to this opinion as well.
Firstly,we have to admit that spreading some big companies and factories out of the city area can release the pressure of traffic and housing problem in a certain extent,but I do not believe the problem will be solved by this way in a long run because new small companies will take up these spaces.And of courese,there are still unadequate houses to match the need of citizens.
On the other hand,with the ever-accelerate development of economic,nowadays almost all the families have at least one private car.So w
Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories with their employees to the countryside. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The iusses about traffic and housing are tend to be worse and worse.Some people suggest that we should encourage large companies and factories moving to the romote area in order to solved these problems.Personally,I am not a supporter to this opinion as well.
Firstly,we have to admit that spreading some big companies and factories out of the city area can release the pressure of traffic and housing problem in a certain extent,but I do not believe the problem will be solved by this way in a long run because new small companies will take up these spaces.And of courese,there are still unadequate houses to match the need of citizens.
On the other hand,with the ever-accelerate development of economic,nowadays almost all the families have at least one private car.So w
提问时间:2021-01-07
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の,你的作文语法上的错误比较多哦,你可以仔细看看你的第一段,有挺多问题的,比如:are tend to be worse and worse这句话,这里不用are,就算你用了,那也要改成被动态.第一段的最后一句话,你是要表达你不赞成前一个观点...
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