题目

急 英文询问信 帮忙检查一下有没有语法错误
Dear madam or sir:
Thank you for your sparing time to read my letter.
I am Chinese college student ,21years old.I want to join the lee kong chian School of Business .I have interested in business.And parents are business too.parents in their words and deeds that I have set a very positive view of the honesty ,and know the major of the team .In order to temper themselves ,I use the holiday time to go to the supermarket for work..70 percent of people have gave up the hard work but I insisted on it .I m good at thinking the things flexible .I joined the technological invention game and won the third place .At the same time I apply for a monopolization.
I have been considering to study in your school for quiet some time.I have some question the following:
First I d also like to know I have no language achievement whether can be advanced school for learning and take the exam then .
Second What are the professional of business
And last what

提问时间：2021-01-03

答案

1行,DEAR SIR OR MADAM,
2行,YOUR去掉
4行,HAVE改AM
其他的弄不明白你想表达什么,挺乱的