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请英语高手帮我点评我的这篇英语四级作文.（语法和用词）万分感谢
1：大学生出去旅游经常会选择“自助游”
2：分析大学生选择“自助游”的原因
3：你的看法
Nowadays,more and more college students will choose self-help travel instead of travel with a group when they want to spare a time to relax themselves.
Self-help travel,one can enjoy more freedom.The travelers can arrange their tour as they wishes without the limit of travel agency .Moreover ,they can buy something by themselves and avoid the compulsory consumption.At last,if the students like a beautiful scenic and they will have more time to leave it and take a photograph.
As to me ,I prefer to the travel with a group.Firstly,it can save more money.Secondly,I like to share the pleasure of traveling with others.Lastly,we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties better in the journey.

提问时间：2021-01-02

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