题目

请帮我看一下这个有没有语法错误
star is singing songs to the rose,the melody of guitar runs around ears,i love you more than my words,say goodbye to precious,sorry did not give warm hugs,feeling hurt when i last time saw your tears,you will marry someone in wonderful dress,and i will play songs to beg for your happiness,oh dear,i will always miss you like the one and the only rose.有什么错误请帮我改一下好不好?

提问时间：2020-12-29

答案

Star is singing songs to the rose,and the melody of guitar runs around ears.I love you more than any words.I say goodbye to precious things and I am sorry that I did not give you warm hugs.I felt hurt when I saw your tears last time.You will marry someone in a wonderful dress,and I will play songs for your happiness.Oh dear.I will always miss you as the only rose.感觉很中文啊.最近在学GMAT语法,看着每句话都有错的感觉- -.那个语法实在是太严格了,我简单的给你改了一下.仅供参考啦