题目

My room作文求修改.
Here are two nice pictures of my room.Behind the two bookcases is my desk.Well,I
think I’m not very tidy.But my desk is not really messy.There is a telephone
behind my dictionary.The light is on the desk.And the tape player is on the
desk,too.My chair is under the desk.
Let me talk about my bookcases.Here is a
picture of my one bookcase.There are some things in my bookcase.My tapes,my
dictionaries,my magazines,my notebooks are all in the bookcase.Do you see
those red magazines?They are “Computer Fans”.I really like reading them.
My room is very nice.I love it very much.Doyou have your own room?Tell me about it,please!

提问时间：2020-12-26

答案

全改,该成I have a new room..There is bookcase,chair,desk,table,bed in my small room.My hat is on the chair.My baseball is under the bed.My school ID card is on the table.My CDs are in my backpack.Oh,there is a picture of mine on the wall.
My room is very nice.I like it very much.Do you have your own room?Tell me!