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the day when my life changed the better was the day when i had met killian,my dog.on entering apet shops,iwas soon attracted by this little dog,knowing as the king of dogs.i would usual lie down on the floor ang he would lie down besides me.if i left the room,she would cry until i returned.it didn't matter if someone else was in aroom with him or not.little did i know that i were making so a huge investment in my life.

提问时间：2020-12-23

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The day when my life changed TO the better was the day when I MET Killian, my dog, AFTER entering a pet SHOP. I was soon attracted TO this little dog, KNOWN as the king of dogs. I would USUALLY lie down on the floor AND he would lie down BESIDE me. If I left the room, HE would cry until I returned. It didn't matter WHETHER someone else was in a room with him or not. Little did I know that I was making SUCH a huge investment in my life
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