题目

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题目：
After they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns. Others live in different towns and cities. Which do you think is better? Give reasons for your answer.
正文：
After they complete their university studies, some students prefer to live in their hometowns while others choose to live in different towns or cities. Everybody has his own reasons for his preference.
After my graduation, I will go back and live in my home city. I have made this decision because of the following reasons.
Firstly, my home city is a big city that can offer a lot. There are plenty of opportunities for work, many big libraries for studies, several differrent musiums for visit, and numerous cinemas, theaters and centers for entertainment. When I go back there, I will have no difficulty in finding a job suitable for me and I can make use of all the facilities available there.
Secondly, if I go back to my home city, I can look after my p

提问时间：2020-12-17

答案

写得不错,很详尽.但我觉得有些跑题.题目是问你个人对此问题的看法,不是你个人选择.试着写了一篇如下:After completion of university study,some students choose to live in their hometowns,while others choose t...