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In the era of imformation and technology.The fact is that Recreational activities is necessary for us to keep out phsical and mental health.
Virtually a variey of recreational activities can be chosen,it mat be beneficial but also harmful
If we make appropriate allocation of time at recreation and work,it will be a favor affair.On the contrary wo do it with a wrong way that it will be a bad effect.there is no doubt that everything has opposite itself.suppose we handle the relation bewteen them "the beneficial" will stay with us.
To my point,Recreational activities are bound to a important part to us daily life.As long as we take a right way,it will be beneficial for our whole life
题目是讨论Recreational activities
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提问时间：2020-12-08

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variey ,bewteen?基本的单词都错phsical and mental health.建议phsically and mentally health这样更加书面化.it mat be beneficial but also建议改成it may not only be beneficial but also...at recreation and ...