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题目是关于改变的agreement.是否应该改变 剑桥6 test4 的大作文
Each individual has unique personality.Some of them are tend to change themselves but some are not.Generally,I think changes sometimes are necessary.
First of all,the trend of 21 century is become more and more international,so that is why globalization is a hot word of press nowaday.If you want to catch up with this fast pace society,the better way is make some changes of yourself,individuals have to adjust themselves instead of hoping the world to adapt them.Therefore,changing is essential for living in our society.
Secondly,there are many kinds of changing such as improve your skills and knowledge of your industry,it can makes your work to be more efficiency and valuable.Another example is technology had develop very fast in past few years such as Internet and micro-communication also e-business,so it is important to feed up us to adapt this fast developed society.In terms of human relationship,if you re

提问时间：2020-12-06

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第三行 is becone 我觉得有问题 保留is或者become,或者用becomingfast pace society 明显的中式英语 可以用从句 修饰society更好吧我觉得第五行,individual前面大写 不能用逗号因为这两句没有连词 不能构成compound ...