题目

Dear sir or madam,
I would like to introduce you a brilliant student specializing in Advertising of our university—** University,in China.Qian has always been outstanding and positive in her studies and life,and this bright star of ours would be sure to be more outstanding in her later life.
She has been rewarded the first level scholarship when she was a freshman,and has been give the second level scholarship when she was a sophomore.Moreover,she has been selected as an exchange student to study in Central Connecticut State University when she was in third year.Accordingly,Qian worked hard and got almost A in her final.You can image that how proud I am of her!
As one of her professor,not only do I like her satisfied performance in study but also her great personalities.Qian has participated in lots of charitable events,especially,she has been teaching in a Hope Primary School once a week for two years as a volunteer.And often,when her classmates had any troubles,she always came to help them.Qian was a perfect student leader in her class.Her great personalities were admitted by all of her professors and classmates.They all like her and love to be friends with her.
As a result,she is brilliant and I do hope you can accept her.If you have any questions,please do not hesitate to contact with me.
Sincerely
Professor

提问时间：2020-12-03

答案

说实话,这篇推荐信的质量不高啊.结构跟内容都有问题,这个很难改.我只能把语法跟词汇改了,内容还要lz自己斟酌~Qian has always been outstanding 改为 Qian is always outstand一般时更好,表示一如既往.And I'm sure ...