题目

求一篇英语短文改错
一篇英语改错
It was about eight in the evening.It was raining heavy so I had to stay at home.I was reading the interesting novel in my room.Suddenly,the bell rang.I immediately rose to my foot to answer it.To my surprise,it was a stranger,who stood there,looked a little of shy."Is there anything I can do for you,sir?" I asked."Um,I'm sorry for interrupting,and I am dying about something to drink." "Wait a minute." I said,but when I returned a glass of water,the man is nowhere to be found.How a stranger man he was!
短文内有十处错误
尽量做到全对.
感激不尽.

提问时间：2020-11-30

答案

It was about eight in the evening.It was raining heavy(改heavily） so I had to stay at home.I was reading the（改为an） interesting novel in my room.Suddenly,the bell rang.I immediately rose to my foo...