题目

六年级英语演讲稿“what i cannot affort to lost”,帮我看看写得怎么样谢谢
hello everone ,i am going to talk about "what i cannot to lost",thanks you for your listen.
friend,are inmportant to me.when i am sad,they always comefort me.
one afternoon,my friend sally and me will take bus go home(我们家住一起),but this time,i found that i haveno monny to take bus sally just has 1 RMB.sally wants to walk me bake home waik home ,3KM!that is very far!………………时间来不及了就打这么多求指点

提问时间：2020-11-03

答案

首先标题不太对,应该是What I cannot afford to lose.to后面跟原型,lost 是过去式.以下是订正后的正确句型.
第一段,thank you for your listening.
Friends are important to me.
My friend and I took a bus to go home,we live in the same block/ area.But I suddenly found that I had (注意用过去式）no money to take the bus!Sally had only 1RMB.So he wanted(过去式）to walk me back home!It's 3 Km !That is very far!
大概就是这样.对于6年级来说,你已经很棒了,加油!