题目

求助高手帮忙看看这篇雅思大作文能够打多少分,并且给点修改意见,
There are many advertisements directed at children such as snacks,toys and other goods.Parents argue that children are under pressure.Advertisers claim that the advertisements provide useful information.What is your opinion?
文章：
In contemporary world,the issue that whether advertisements are helpful to children or not,is a controversial topic and brings hot discussion.People who criticize advertisements contend that these proffer too much information to allure children to purchase the products,which may impose severe pressure on children.I disagree with this statement.I maintain that advertisements play an important role in young children’s lives.Several examples and reasons are listed as follows.
Apparently,some advertisements are intended made to attract children’s attention and others provide unnecessary information that may mislead young children who lack the ability of discrimination.However,in my observation,there are still many bri

提问时间：2020-11-02

答案

Task2也就是大作文,要求考生在40分钟内写作一篇不少于250字的议论文.在Task 2方面非常相似.考生可能需要对某个观点发表支持或反驳意见,或者讨论针锋相对的一组观点,或者解释某种问题出现的原因并提出相应的解决办法....