题目

帮忙修改一篇英语作文
怎样才能保持健康?请根据以下提示写一篇不少于80词的短文（15分）
提示：1、健康饮食 2、适当的运动 3、良好的生活习惯 4、愉快的心情
How to keep healthy
A good healthy lifestyle help us with our study and life.So it's important to keep healthy.
Do you know how to keep healthy?I have some ideas.First you should eat more healthy food.Such as vegetables and fruit.Then doing some sports and keeping some good habits.They can help you get stronger.Also,you should keep happy every day.Try to fotget all your troubles and smile at everyone.Then,you can find that every day is wonderful.
I think you may know how to keep healthy.Now let's moving together to keep our healthy.
请各位修改一下,指出错误,然后给出一个分数!在此先谢谢啦!

提问时间：2020-10-31

答案

1:help-helps
2:doing,keeping--do and heep,你那不是一句话
3：moving-move,let 后用原型
大概12分左右