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The United States of America: a Fantastic Country
The United States of America is a country in the north of America. The U.S.A has got borders with Canada and Mexico. Canada is on the north of it and Mexico is on the south. The U.S.A. has got a population of about 308,750,000. The people in the U.S.A. we call them American. The official language of the U.S.A is English, and the currency in the U.S.A. is dollar. The word for Nihao in English is Hello or Hi. The U.S.A is a large country and the capital of it is Washington D.C.
The weather in the U.S.A is warm. It is warmer than that in Canada and cooler than that in Mexico. There are many developed cities, such as the city of New York.
The city of New York is the centre of the world. Although it is not the capital of the U.S.A. There are also a lot of rich people and students from all over the world.
The city of New York is the largest city of the world. It is a city in the south-west of New York.
The city of New York is the financial and economic centre of the U.S.A. There are many famous sceneries, such as Statue of Liberty, United Nations Headquarters and Ellis Island Immigration Museum. You can see the whole world in this city. It's really fantastic.
In the fields of scientific research, American scholars have got a lot of Nobel Prize especially in the areas of biology and medicine. If you are a big fan of science. You should come here.
Do you want to go to The U.S.A.? You can go there by plane for 17 hours. A return ticket is 4650 yuan. The U.S.A. is a fantastic country. You should go there and open your eyes.

提问时间：2020-10-13

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The word for Nihao in English is Hello or Hi.The U.S.A is a large country and the capital of it is Washington D.C.衔接不自然.可以多举几个特殊的例子 豆腐、中国功夫等等.
The weather in the U.S.A is warm.可以用个always.