题目
修改英语作文,看看有没有错?
在睡公主城堡上 这个词组怎么写?
Dream In Hong Kong
My dream was come true.
Last weekeng,I went to Hong Kong on vacation.I thought Hong Kong was a really beautiful city and fell in love with it.Third day in Hong Kong,we went to Disneylang.I had a grea time,although the weather wa very hot.In Disneyland,I met Mickey Mouse,Donald Duck and many other famous Disney characters.Perhaps you have even see them in movies,bue I saw them in front of me!And I saw Disney Cruise ,Disney movies and played roller coaster!You can imagine how interesting it was!I took lots of photos in Disneyland and especially took a photo with Donald Duck!But I was very regretful that I couldn’t took a photo with Mickey Mouse,because it had the most people took a photo with he!At night,we saw that beautiful fireworks(在睡公主城堡上 ).And finally,I bought many Disney souveenirs.That’s wonderful!
In Hong Kong,I saw many tall buildings and many foreigners.And I went to a big store saw many beautiful clothes and many beautiful souvenirs.Then,we went sightseeing Hong Kong Island,Victoria Harbor and many other famous places.I also took many photos.I thing everywhere in Hong Kong is beautiful!
It is unforgettable for me to take a vacation in Hong Kong!I think it well be my the sweetest memories!
第一句我已经知道了,但我改成My dream was coming true.可不可以?
在睡公主城堡上 这个词组怎么写?
Dream In Hong Kong
My dream was come true.
Last weekeng,I went to Hong Kong on vacation.I thought Hong Kong was a really beautiful city and fell in love with it.Third day in Hong Kong,we went to Disneylang.I had a grea time,although the weather wa very hot.In Disneyland,I met Mickey Mouse,Donald Duck and many other famous Disney characters.Perhaps you have even see them in movies,bue I saw them in front of me!And I saw Disney Cruise ,Disney movies and played roller coaster!You can imagine how interesting it was!I took lots of photos in Disneyland and especially took a photo with Donald Duck!But I was very regretful that I couldn’t took a photo with Mickey Mouse,because it had the most people took a photo with he!At night,we saw that beautiful fireworks(在睡公主城堡上 ).And finally,I bought many Disney souveenirs.That’s wonderful!
In Hong Kong,I saw many tall buildings and many foreigners.And I went to a big store saw many beautiful clothes and many beautiful souvenirs.Then,we went sightseeing Hong Kong Island,Victoria Harbor and many other famous places.I also took many photos.I thing everywhere in Hong Kong is beautiful!
It is unforgettable for me to take a vacation in Hong Kong!I think it well be my the sweetest memories!
第一句我已经知道了,但我改成My dream was coming true.可不可以?
提问时间:2020-10-09
答案
At night,we saw some beautiful fireworks over/above the Sleeping Princess Castle.
改错:文中有多处单词拼写错误,估计是打错了,就不多计较.
第一行;really a 比较符合习惯.
第二行:On the third day
第七行:1.could't take
2.there were the most people taking photos with Mickey Mouse.
第十行:I saw many beautiful--------(省略了)in a big store.
第十一行:sightseeing后少一个介词of(我认为是of)
第十二行;everywhere是副词,不能做主语.可改为it is beautiful everywhere in Hongkong.
第十四行:my 和 the去其一.
错单词是你打错了吧,如:weekend,land,great,was,seen,but,think,will等
第一句话有大错误:My dream came true!
还有一个错误:第七行:I was so regretful that-----(so--that是固定搭配)
改错:文中有多处单词拼写错误,估计是打错了,就不多计较.
第一行;really a 比较符合习惯.
第二行:On the third day
第七行:1.could't take
2.there were the most people taking photos with Mickey Mouse.
第十行:I saw many beautiful--------(省略了)in a big store.
第十一行:sightseeing后少一个介词of(我认为是of)
第十二行;everywhere是副词,不能做主语.可改为it is beautiful everywhere in Hongkong.
第十四行:my 和 the去其一.
错单词是你打错了吧,如:weekend,land,great,was,seen,but,think,will等
第一句话有大错误:My dream came true!
还有一个错误:第七行:I was so regretful that-----(so--that是固定搭配)
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