题目

检查这篇英语作文有何语法拼写错误
Last year,after we gurtuated form junior high school.We organized a journey to Fenghuang.
Phoenix is an old town which surrounded by mountains and river,It's
famous for the night in the town.when dark comes,with all the light lighted,a lots of people walked on the
road,the bar opened,the old town falled into happiness.
Not only the beautiful view attract me,but also I enjoy the time we play
together.we were shopping and visiting
the town in day.Singing and drinking in the bar at night.Moreover,we play
majiang and pork until next morning.
This is an unforgetable journey.I believe that I won't let it disappeared in my memory

提问时间：2020-08-13

答案

唉喺,你这个句子断的都不对么,英文一句话只有一个主干,也就是只有一个主谓宾,就算是很长很长的复句,它的句子主干部分还是一个,其他的谓语动词都要用分词形式来表示的,具体用什么分词还要根据句子来用.你看,你作文中...