题目

这篇英语作文有什么错误?
题目：你父母是你朋友么？你父母让你取得好成绩吗？你父母让你交朋友么？请以If I were a father/mother为题，写一篇作文
作文：
If I were a father
We all must be fathers or mothers in the future.If I were a father how should I treat my kids?Here is my idea
If I were a father I would teach my kid a lot if truth. For example, Iwould teach my kid to be happy all the time,to reagrd difficulty as challenge,to beat all the problems……If I were a father I would make friends with my kid , I would play games with it,I would keep it healthy,and growing fast.If I were a father ,I wouldn't make it get so good grades,but it is not allowed to copy others.Also I would help it to make a lots of friends.
I believe if I were a father ,I would be very good

提问时间：2020-08-10

答案

我就在原文上改动了哦~f I were a fatherWe all must be fathers or mothers in the future.（这句我会说成：we all will become parents in the future）If I were a father,how should I treat my kids?Here is my...