题目

女神的作业.短文在下.句型和单词都有错误.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am very interested in your products after I visited your stand at the Paris trade exhibition last month
I would be grateful if you could send me your catalogue for the complete range of this kind of product as well as your price list
Besides stainless steel cutlery I also request a quotation for mild steel C.I.F.let me know your terms of payment and the time required for delivery after you receive the order if terms and delivery time are satisfactory we will place regular orders you faithful
Linda Wang

提问时间：2020-07-27

答案

Dear Sir or Madam(,)
I am very interested in your products after I (have) visited your stand at the Paris trade exhibition last month(.)
I would be (most)grateful if you could send me your catalogue for the complete range of this kind of product as well as your price list(.)
Besides stainless steel cutlery I also request a quotation for mild steel C.I.F.(Please)let me know your terms of payment and the time required for delivery after you (have)receive(received) the order(.) if(If) terms and delivery time are satisfactory(,) we will place regular orders(.)
you faithful(Yours Faithfully,)
Linda Wang
信最大错处是没有标点,另外只有少许错漏,已替你更正好了,希望会令你满意.